My World by orlando alvarado

My room

You see a white clean door. You open it, and it smells Good like Airfreshener. There’s a Black Carpet and you see a made bed. Also, you hear music playing and the gate being open, and closed. You Also See clothes hanged neatly in the closet, organized shoes  and a big plasma T.v and it smells like brand new clothes. Thers also a big widow with no dust and when its open, you smell the burning of weed/kush being smoked. There’s also a big red drawer and in the night you can hear people tagging/doing Graffiti  in the alley and also hear cats meowing . also you can hear the neighbor coughing because he is smoking. You can hear people talking and chattering in the alley but when you open the window all you smells is we and the smell of piss. Also, you hear people walking downstairs back and forth. Also Sometimes the room smells like Takis. You also See a dirty couch that really needs to be clean and kinda smells like feet.

An Experience

 The experience i had was when i fell in love. on sept22,10 i met a girl on my moms wedding. i really liked her and i never imagined that i would fall in love with her. She also really liked me so she would come to my house everyday to go see me. i loved her and she loved me. but, at first she never trusted me because she thought i was a player. i told her i wasnt so she said to show her that she was the one i loved. so i showed her, i stop partying, put my friends in front of her. but then she moved to compton. and we discussed about that we cant be together nomore because she moved home. i told her that the distance dont matter. that i would still go on the bus to go see her. But she decided to break up with me. sometimes i ask myself if she really loved me she wouldnt had care if i would only get to see her once a week. i even asked her if it was cause of that reason only, or if she found another guy to tell me staright out. and she said No its because of that.